Expert Personal Statement and Essay Writing
Enhance your application with our top-tier personal statement service. Our skilled writers expertly craft your story, emphasizing your academic and professional achievements. Choose us for a compelling, concise narrative that boosts your admission prospects.
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How We Can Help
- Essay writing and editing support
- Common App and supplemental essays
- Graduate personal statements and statements of purpose
- UC personal insight questions
- Structure and clarity revisions
- Proofreading
- Background review and consultations
- Essay revisions with no set limit
Services and Pricing
Price for Editing Personal Statements and Application Essays
| Service | Price |
|---|---|
| Initial Phone Consultation (15 minutes) | Free |
| Personal Statement / Application Essays (all essays for one school totaling fewer than 900 words) | First School $1,485 Subsequent Schools $742.50 |
| Long Essay (all essays for one school totaling 900-1500 words) | First School $1,985 Subsequent Schools $992.50 |
| Waitlist Appeal Letter / Letter of Continued Interest | $1,485 |
| Rush Fee (per incident) | $500 (Call for Details) |
For help choosing a service, call 310-951-4008.
Our Personal Statement Editing Process
We build your essay from verified details, then shape it to fit your prompt and your target schools. The goal is a focused statement that reads cleanly and feels credible.
- Send your materials: your existing essays, transcript, test scores, and target-school list.
- Discuss your motivation: why you are pursuing this field and what you want admissions readers to understand.
- Gather evidence and stories: your history, accomplishments, and turning points.
- Draft, edit, and proofread: shape the essay around your strengths, experience, and preparation for the field.
- Review and revise: refine the statement for your target program and finalize it for submission.
Frequently Asked Questions
How can SOS Admissions help with my application?
We help with application planning, school selection, personal statements and essays, resumes, letters of recommendation, and interview preparation. Complete packages cover the application process, but you remain responsible for submitting your application.
Do you provide essay writing as well as editing?
Yes. We develop drafts from the verified details you provide, or edit an existing draft. We work with you to present your experience accurately, answer the prompt, and revise the material for your target program.
Do you guarantee admission?
No one can guarantee admission to a specific college or graduate program. We evaluate your background and help you present a strong application, while the institution makes the admission decision.
Can we work together remotely?
Yes. Consultations are available by phone and video, including Zoom, FaceTime, WhatsApp, WeChat, and Google Meet. In-person meetings in the Beverly Hills area are available by appointment.
How much do your services cost?
Prices depend on the program and service. See the pricing section on the relevant program page. For help choosing a service or questions about your payment, call 310-951-4008.
How do I get started?
Schedule a Free Initial Consultation through our contact form or call 310-951-4008. The initial phone consultation is 15 minutes. We will discuss your background, goals, and the services that fit your application.
What is your refund policy on admissions packages?
If you request a refund on an admissions package, services already rendered are billed at the hourly rate and the remaining balance is refunded. Contact our team to discuss your package and the work completed.