An activity description should help a reader understand what you did and why your contribution mattered. Use your own records to make each entry accurate, specific, and easy to follow.
Choose Experiences That Represent Your Commitments
Consider school activities, employment, family responsibilities, community involvement, and independent interests. Follow the current application’s categories and field limits. You do not need to fill every available space with a minor activity.
State Your Role and Actions
Explain your actual responsibilities with concrete verbs. Give context when an organization’s name would be unfamiliar. Avoid inflated titles and do not imply that a team’s entire result was your individual achievement.
Use Numbers Only When You Can Verify Them
Check dates, time commitments, participant counts, and outcomes against reliable records. Do not invent a percentage to make an activity sound stronger. Explain a meaningful contribution in words when you do not have a defensible measurement.
Learn from a Hypothetical Example
The following is an invented illustration, not a client story or evidence of admission: “Library volunteer: organized returned books, helped visitors locate resources, and prepared materials for children’s reading sessions.” It describes observable work without claiming an unsupported result. Use only details that are true of your own activity.
Review the Entire Entry
Make the description consistent with the role, dates, and hours you report elsewhere. Remove unexplained abbreviations and repeated wording. Preview the completed application and check the current Common App first-year application guidance before submitting.
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